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She struggled with all her might but could not free herself as many men were pushing her down.
She was also crying for the help but no spectator came to help her.
Then the man came with the knife and slit her throat.
Her last wish was that someday people stop eating meat so that goats can live longer.
P.S. - Was going for Fiction 55 but went beyond by four words. Any way I just hope that you like this attempt of mine better than my last 55er.
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Hey PETA would love this 55er you know..Gr8 job! ONly one entry this time? :P Aaah thanks, that means lesser competition..:DReplyDelete
Jokes apart Al d best dost..:D
Thanks Vibhuti not one entry I have completed two entries thinking for more. you know quality is more important than quantity. wouldn't you agree?ReplyDelete
hehe :) Liked it a lot Vikas. Impressive :)ReplyDelete
All the best!!
yeah.. I agree with Vibhuti... Just yesterday I saw a lot of celebrities promoting vegetarianism and today, I read your post...ReplyDelete
Thanks dear. happy that people seems to like this post. Hope that i start getting some votes this BAT :) :(ReplyDelete
thanks very much chandni for the comment. try to vote for me.ReplyDelete
Sensitive write up.. but when human beings are ready to 'eat' human beings, who cares for goats now a days? But that does not reduce value of what you are saying.ReplyDelete
Interesting post... the first of its kind I have seen in blogsphere.ReplyDelete
this is amazing!! :)ReplyDelete
though i am a meat eater but seriously i am not in for cruelty against animals..
Thanks Aativas .. for liking the postReplyDelete
thanks vikram see if you find me good enough to get my first vote in BATReplyDelete
Nice post Vikas bhai!!!ReplyDelete
Keep it up!!! Loved it!! Easy to read and conveyed a lot!!
Best wishes!! :D
Thanks Azad it really means a lot to get such lovely comments.ReplyDelete
Nice laconic story of 59 words and yet enough to convey the message powerfully. Love it !!ReplyDelete
Thank you very much Binzy for your kind words of appreciation.ReplyDelete
Really a wish that has to be granted for sure.ReplyDelete
I wish you a good luck for BATOM - 12
Saravana Kumar - Wish
Saravana Kumar M
Huh! I thought a heinous crime was about to happen...nice twist in the end Vikas...:-) t'was a surprise, you said its a surprise and it is a surprise..:PReplyDelete
Hey, very well written! Even though u went over the word limit it was well expressed.ReplyDelete
Good Wishes for BAT12!
Gkam - Wish
Hell....now I'll have 2 think and think hard b4 i eat meat :-(ReplyDelete
that's what someone told me how a 55er should be glad that you like it. now i wish that someone vote for me as well.ReplyDelete
no pressure but still if you can someone will be very happy whose life will be spared. :DReplyDelete
Bhai Sorry for going over the limit but original idea was within limit but converting that to 'wish' cost me four more words. Thanks for liking itReplyDelete
Thank you very much Amity for liking the story. I just hope that someone cast first vote for me this BAT.ReplyDelete
Wow. I ready so many posts tonight but this one really touched me. All da best Vikas :)ReplyDelete
Thanks Guddu for liking the story now I only hope that you liked it enough to vote for me.ReplyDelete
Sweet! Love Goats...Alive ;)ReplyDelete
nothing like that just people in India mostly eat them for meat that's why.ReplyDelete
a vegetarian and green wish :)ReplyDelete
LOL thanks Mahesh. Hope you like it enough to vote for itReplyDelete
nice attempt here....likd da core of the subject...interesting way of dealing with the topic "Wish"....likd it! following ya! tc! :)ReplyDelete
Wow didn't know one story would do that Yahoo I have 5 followers now. Thanks man for liking the story. you guys are what give me reason to write more and write better.ReplyDelete
Reminds me of a post which I wanted to write on the same lines!ReplyDelete
all the best yaar...its realy very good..!!
Short and sweetReplyDelete
short and sweet :)...its like 1 ball 6 runs required...and you hit a sixer ;)ReplyDelete
All the best for BAT!
Then I am glad I got there first . :D just kidding . thanks for your comments try to see if the post is worthy of your votesReplyDelete
Thank you very much Meduri Hope to bring you good content year and year afterReplyDelete
Thank you very much Mayur.ReplyDelete
I have read a Fiction 55 for the first time. I liked the punch in the story. All the Best for BATOMReplyDelete
thanks Vitthal that was my only 2nd 55er which I couldn't match anyhow due to topic constraint. but thanks for the comments.ReplyDelete
Hey nice one Vikas.. super duper twist :)ReplyDelete
Rocking story-starts off by creating a very different picture and ends up with a altogether different twist.ReplyDelete
And the fact that you have done with such brevity and flourish is what makes it amazing !
Thanks Vipul .. all the best to you too for BAT-12ReplyDelete
Thanks Brijender so such wonderful words. All the best for BAT-12ReplyDelete
nice twist.. good job even as a 55er!! ;0ReplyDelete
There is a picture I saw in the news (I wish I had the link to it) which would be so perfect with this post. I'll try and summarize it in words; there is a shop and to the right of the entrance to the shop there is a child sitting and playing with a goat. The profoundity comes in when you realize that its a butchers shop....I'm sure you can imagine the thoughts that ensue.ReplyDelete
Yes Sidra .. Thanks for the comment.Delete