Saturday, July 23, 2011

Revenge

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 22; the twenty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

He came running from office as soon as he heard voice of his wife's frantic voice on his mobile. Chintu was missing and no where to be found.

"What Happened? Where is Chintu?" He asked his wife as soon as he saw her ...

but she just shook her head in negative all the while crying

"Why did you beat him so much?" She asked him

"Because I don't want him to become a thief in future, that's why. You know how much I love him right?" He looked towards her with pleading eyes

"I know, you love him but he is only a child. He doesn't understand all these things." She said

"Tell me what could I have done when he stole all those chocolates from store, its not like that I denied him anything." He started crying too

"Don't worry, we will find Chintu. He must have gone to his friend's home in anger that's all. Now you stop crying, you don't look at all good while crying." She tried to comfort him

"He knows, how much we love him, I also tried to explain to Chintu that you only beat him because you love him so much." She said trying to be strong for both of them

suddenly she saw a paper stuck below her pillow on the bed and grabbed it as fast as she could.

"What's that?" he asked her

"Its a letter from Chintu." She said

"Read quickly" He said

But she had already finished reading the letter and fainted as soon as she read it. He supported her to the bed and then picked the letter from the floor and started reading it .. what he read changed his life....

"Papa Mummy,
                      You have never understood me. Never let me enjoy like my friends. You never provided me with Good clothes like my friends. Never gave me pocket money like my friends. Mummy said that you hit me because you love me and that she also loves me. But I am angry with you both, and after thinking very hard for a long time,  I know the perfect revenge. I killed myself. Now love me, now beat me, now show me your love. oops you can't because I am no longer your son now I am dead boy who completed his revenge. Someone said correctly when he said that revenge is a dish best served cold, cold as my dead body.


Bye Bye"
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32 comments:

  1. Someone is SpecialJuly 23, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    Iyo... This is not the right decision boy... Sad.. and I can't imaging this kind of revenge, as cold as his dead body.. Vikas a great post man... Good luck.. Here is my post, Oh, this is .... ReVeNge

    Someone is Special

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  2. Not a good decision by the boy! Very sad!

    BTW, you dont nod head in negative. You shake it.

    And some tense mistake in the letter as a dead boy cant write a letter... So the letter has to be in future tense!

    ATB for the BAT...

    Read mine at Revenge is best when served cold

    Regards Wandering Thoughts

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  3. Tragic it was :(
    all the best for BAT.
    Here is my entry for the same: 
    Revenge

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  4. I have read a lot of your posts on very positive and romantic topics, and even their, you were ruthless in your narration.
    So, when this topic was put up, it was quite a wait to see how you would deal with it. And you haven't disappointed !!
    The fierce manner in which the son has written his letter has revenge written all over it-the sole intent being to get even with those who he felt had wronged him.
    And, as always, the brevity of your expression makes for a very easy and enjoyable read.

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  5. Thanks Brijender for the wonderful comment and the fact that you are one of those few people who follow my stories. Man you made it worthwhile to write this story. I will try not to disappoint you in the future as well. Thanks once again and All the Best for your own post . :)

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  6. Thanks very much Animesh. 

    Same to you.

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  7. Thanks Aashish for the corrections offered by you, I will surely implement and correct them. 

    But if I may, I would like to counter your suggestion about letter by saying that the dead boy can't write but the boy wrote the letter before dying. 

    I am still a beginner so can't be sure of letter writing so would like more support from you and all others as well to help me here.

    Thank you very much for taking time and helping me here.

    ATB for BAT

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  8. Thanks man .. for taking time to read my post and then commenting on it as well. 

    ATB for BAT

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  9. What a revenge! And possible too, at that young age. No wonder current stem of public opinion is against beating children. Though I always thank my parents for punishments they gave me as a child and feel it built my character, I sometimes feel probably I am not loving them enough and seem to enjoy time with outsiders more because of that.

    Here's my Blog-a-ton post : Revenge

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  10. Exactly my thoughts buddy. Thanks for the comment and liking the post .. ATB For BAT-22

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  11. That was quite sad .. I feel, despite parents very open mind these days, a child often feels unloved .. Its up to parents how not to make that thought grip in his mind .. A story written in simplistic and realistic way . Wish you luck buddy :)

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  12. Thanks gal for liking the post .. I will sure find the time read all the entries and leave the comments .. thanks again .. and All the Best for BAT

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  13. Children are very vulnerable , especially accompanied with peer pressure... good read...all the best

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  14. This could happen in Real Life. Also I liked the way the letter was written as if the child was still alive. It showed his innocence and foolishness at the same time.

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  15. Thanks Shilpa for liking the post. ATB for BAT

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  16. A really sad story... can't imagine the shock the parents would have got on reading the letter.

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  17. Thanks Vik for liking the story .. ATB for BAT 

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  18.  my god this is terrible...but it happens every-other day.....it sends a inner meaning.

    here is mine take a look



    the revenge of aparniyan- Revenge 

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  19. Thanks man .. for taking time to read my postATB for BAT

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  20. Hard hitting story but very sad & being a new father I actually hated reading it. But I know life can be as fatal as your story shows & children needs to be handled carefully. I remember reading a news article about a sucide recently. I was moved by it & your story took me back to that news.
    ATB for BAT

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  21. Thanks Vitthal for liking the story .. and sorry if it hurt you but as you know its just a story and my intention was never to hurt anybody with this or any of my other stories. ATB to you too . :) 

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  22. Very sad but realistic! 

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  23. Thanks Aativas for commenting .. ATB for BAT.

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  24. OMG, he actually killed himself!! :'(
    Sad state of affairs when a child feels the need to take revenge on his parents..

    All the best:)

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  25. *gulp*
    Goddd! dat is jus soooo xtreme!!
    c i wud like to think he was kiddin n wud cum baq home soon. most unpleasant!!
    y did u do disssss!!!!! aah!
    i kno i kno its jus a story blah blah...bt it really gives me d creeps :o

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  26. First of all thank you very much .. Revenge is always extreme 

    If I am not too wrong I should be happy that I was able to finally write something which brought forward such reactions from my readers. Thank you very much .. ATB for BAT please do come back to read some more and give your valuable feedback. :)

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  27. Thanks Priyanka for the comment .. What to say today's kids are like anything .. :( .. It was just a story I wouldn't wish something like this even to my enemy (BTW I have no enemies, everyone is my friend :)). ATB for BAT.

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  28. :( sad ending :( poor parents :(
    Kids should understand that they are not beaten up because their parents hate them but beacsue they love them and want them to become good

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  29. Hi Bhaiya, nice story, sadly its a true story, saw an episode of crime patrol based on this, the boy killed himself by drinking pheonyl, however his dad was a psycho.

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